Dear Sun,
Thank you for your warming rays and bright light that makes each day of life possible. From the very beginning you shaped me. Everything here is possible due to your gargantuan, size and radiant, brilliance. You influence my tides and seasons providing summer’s warmth and winter’s cooling. Your gravitational pull allows me stability. Due to your presence, I’m blessed with food, water, and oxygen, teaming with life of many types. Without you, I would be a boring, cold, dark, and desolate rock floating forever through the depths of space. Thank you, so very much, for providing my existence and purpose in the universe.
Love You;
Earth
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Saturday, February 28, 2009
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Can't figure out how to edit once it's been posted so this is for EDRG 3344.
ReplyDeleteI think I would also write a thank you note to sun,I am always cold. I love my house to be lighted. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis was a good thank you note. I like how you point out how important the sun light is in our world. Excellent work. jdc
ReplyDeleteMark the thank you note is great.
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